I am 13 and i want to know if my book is kinda good... honestly?

Saying you're thirteen isn't going to make a difference, this story is still unoriginal and cheesy in every way. I'm thirteen too and I honestly can't see this book on the shelf at the library. Rose McBest? Vampires? Wolves? Animals? I think you need to develop this a little further, one thirteen year old to another :)